The Coconut Grove Mystery

7 min

The Coconut Grove Mystery
An eerie, abandoned plantation house in Saint Lucia, shrouded in mystery and overgrown by nature. The whispers of the past linger in the warm Caribbean air, waiting for the truth to be uncovered.

About this story: The Coconut Grove Mystery is a Historical Fiction from Saint Lucia set in the 20th Century. This Dramatic tale explores themes of Justice and is suitable for Adults. It offers Educational insights. A journalist unearths a deadly mystery in an abandoned Caribbean plantation where the past refuses to rest.

The Caribbean sun hung low over Saint Lucia, casting golden streaks across the endless blue waters. The island was a paradise, known for its rainforests, volcanic peaks, and white sand beaches. But beneath its picturesque beauty, dark secrets lay buried, waiting to be unearthed.

Coconut Grove, an abandoned plantation near Soufrière, had become something of a legend among locals. In 1973, the wealthy Duval family vanished without a trace. Their home, once full of life, stood frozen in time—its doors swinging in the breeze, furniture covered in dust, the whispers of the past carried by the rustling palm trees.

Journalist Daniel Cross had spent years chasing unsolved mysteries, and this one had haunted him for months. What happened to the Duvals that night? Why did no one ever find their bodies? And why did the locals avoid the area, claiming it was cursed?

Determined to uncover the truth, Daniel stepped off the ferry in Soufrière, his bag slung over his shoulder. He wasn’t just here to write a story. He was here to solve a mystery that had remained buried for fifty years.

The Haunting of Coconut Grove

Daniel had read every article he could find about Coconut Grove. He’d spoken to retired officers, dug through old police reports, and even contacted distant relatives of the Duvals. But no one had answers—only theories. Some believed the family had been killed by smugglers, others whispered of vengeful spirits. A few thought they had simply fled, escaping some unknown terror in the dead of night.

But Daniel wasn’t one for ghost stories. He believed in evidence, facts, and hard truths.

As he approached the abandoned plantation, a wave of unease washed over him. The entrance was overgrown with vines, the wrought-iron gate hanging off its hinges. The house loomed ahead, its once-grand white walls now cracked and stained. He took a deep breath and stepped inside.

The air inside was thick with dust and decay. Furniture sat frozen in time, covered in white sheets like forgotten ghosts. A shattered chandelier dangled from the ceiling, swaying slightly.

Then he heard it. A whisper.

*"Leave this place."*

Daniel spun around, his heart hammering. But there was no one there. Only the stillness of the empty house.

He exhaled sharply, shaking his head. Just the wind. Or his imagination. He wasn’t going to be scared off that easily.

He had a mystery to solve.

 A journalist discovers an old diary in the dusty study of an abandoned plantation house, his flashlight casting eerie shadows.
In the decayed study of the old plantation house, the journalist finds a hidden diary—its pages holding the key to a long-buried mystery.

The Hidden Diary

Daniel moved through the house carefully, taking photos, jotting down notes. He needed something—anything—that could give him a clue about what had happened here.

In the study, a massive mahogany desk sat covered in dust. He rummaged through the drawers, finding old letters, receipts, faded photographs. But then, tucked between the pages of a crumbling book, he found it.

A leather-bound journal.

The name Marguerite Duval was embossed in gold on the cover. His pulse quickened as he opened it, the pages delicate beneath his fingers.

*"Something is wrong. I hear whispers at night. Mother says I am imagining things, but I know what I heard. The walls are not silent."*

Daniel frowned. He flipped ahead.

*"Father had another visitor today. A man in dark clothes. They argued. He spoke of debts, of things that should not be spoken of. I think we are in danger."*

A loud *thud* echoed from upstairs.

Daniel froze.

Someone was in the house.

The Shadow in the Hallway

He moved cautiously, his footsteps silent on the dusty wooden floor. The staircase creaked as he ascended, his breath held tight in his chest.

A door at the end of the hall was slightly open.

He pushed it wider.

Inside, the room was empty except for an old bed and a wooden rocking chair. But the chair was moving. Slowly. Back and forth.

Daniel’s skin prickled. He took a step forward, and his foot landed on something hard. He looked down. A rusted key.

He picked it up, the metal cold in his palm. What had this unlocked?

Then he noticed the writing on the wall. Scratched into the wood, barely visible.

*"Find the cellar. Find the truth."*

A chill ran down his spine.

Marguerite had left this message. But for who?

Beneath the House

It took Daniel an hour to find the entrance to the cellar. Hidden beneath a loose floorboard in the study, the trapdoor creaked as he pulled it open.

A damp, musty smell rose from the darkness below.

He descended carefully, his flashlight cutting through the gloom. The cellar was small, lined with stone walls. In the center sat an old wooden chest.

He knelt beside it, using the key he had found upstairs. The lock clicked open.

Inside was a pile of gold coins, wrapped in cloth. But something else was there—an old envelope, yellowed with age. He opened it, his hands trembling.

It was a letter.

*"If you are reading this, you must know the truth. My father made a deal with dangerous men. They wanted the gold, but they wanted more. They came in the night, demanding their payment. When my father refused, they took everything from us."*

Daniel swallowed hard.

*"They killed them all. I hid. But I will not escape. If my spirit remains, let it be a warning. The past does not rest. And the dead do not forget."*

A noise behind him.

Breath on his neck.

He turned.

And the light went out.

A shadowy figure lurks in a dimly lit hallway, an old rocking chair moving slightly, adding to the eerie atmosphere.
In the darkness of the plantation house, something unseen watches. The air is heavy with whispers, and the past refuses to rest.

The Escape

Daniel stumbled backward, his heart slamming against his ribs. He fumbled for his flashlight, the darkness suffocating.

The whisper came again.

*"You should not be here."*

The trapdoor above slammed shut.

Daniel bolted for the far wall, running his hands over the stone. There had to be another way out.

Then he felt it—a gap, a narrow tunnel leading away from the cellar. Without hesitation, he plunged into it, crawling through the damp, suffocating passage.

Behind him, footsteps. Heavy. Approaching.

He scrambled faster. His hands hit open air. He burst out into the jungle, gasping for breath.

Coconut Grove loomed behind him, dark and silent. But he didn’t wait. He ran, the ghost of Marguerite Duval whispering in his ears.

The Truth Exposed

Back in Castries, Daniel sat in a dimly lit café, the journal and documents spread before him. He had the proof he needed. The Duvals had been murdered for their gold. Their killers had buried the truth, and their spirits had remained trapped in that house, waiting for someone to uncover it.

He published his story the next day.

And Coconut Grove was never the same.

Tourists came, drawn by the legend. But some never stayed the night.

Because even now, if you listen closely, you can still hear the whispers.

And if you look into the darkness long enough…

You might just see Marguerite watching.

Waiting.

For the truth to finally set her free.

A journalist kneels in a hidden cellar, reading a letter beside a chest of gold coins, as an ominous shadow looms above.
Deep beneath the house, the journalist uncovers a hidden fortune—and a terrible truth. But danger lurks just beyond the cellar door.

Epilogue: The Mystery Never Ends

Months later, Daniel received a letter.

No return address. Just one sentence.

*"You were not supposed to know."*

He stared at it for a long time.

Then he packed his bags.

Because some stories aren’t over when the last word is written.

Some mysteries refuse to die.

And he had just become part of one.

A journalist sits in a seaside café in Castries, surrounded by documents, staring at a newspaper about the Coconut Grove mystery.
As the sun rises over the Caribbean, the journalist reflects on the chilling truth he uncovered. Some mysteries refuse to be forgotten.

The End.

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